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https://github.com/bytemaster/bytemaster.github.io/blob/master/home.html

I think your points are weak.  You need to sell our products and services outright.

The service is distributed escrow and order matching for a fee.

The product is frictionless, stable currency with 5% incentive to hold.
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https://github.com/bytemaster/bytemaster.github.io/blob/master/home.html

As being an exchange is a main selling point, I think we should add an entry click of "Start to Trade" or something like this which directly links to in-wallet trading instructions(produce a nice and concise one) and wallet downloading, on the homepage. Otherwise it's not natural.
Price chart and index should be highlighted too.
« Last Edit: January 06, 2015, 01:18:01 am by merlin0113 »

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I think we should drop the "real" from the headline, but other than that it looks great. If this is for the frontpage we should also mention that it functions as a decentralized bank where you can store your money and earn yield (and we really gotta get an estimate of the yield in our marketing).

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BitShares has a fixed fee per transaction of just $0.01 means that you can trade any amount for the same price.

This is technically not true, as it fluctuates with BTS price. As we are representing a technology that is supposed to slove price stability, I think it is not acceptable to be inaccurate about this.

I agree. And it will come back to haunt us when the market cap goes up.

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BitShares has a fixed fee per transaction of just $0.01 means that you can trade any amount for the same price.

This is technically not true, as it fluctuates with BTS price. As we are representing a technology that is supposed to slove price stability, I think it is not acceptable to be inaccurate about this.

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BitShares: The World's First Real Decentralized Crypto Currency Exchange

Switch that to

BitShares:The World's First Blockchain Currency Exchange



For some reason, people like and react well to the word "blockchain."  They don't react as well to "crypto currency" and "decentralized."  However, the term "blockchain" implies these things.
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