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Dang straight xeroc.  Stop being lazy...I'll work on translating it into every language I, an American citizen, know....

Hm...do we have it in English yet?  :-\
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Can I please get final ok for the German version so I can convert and upload pdf's.
Thanks :)


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I assume it's in A4 format too. It looks flawless to me!
 
paging @xeroc ...

Yes, this is in A4 format.
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I assume it's in A4 format too. It looks flawless to me!
 
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Here is the newest fixes.

Please carefully look over and let me know if any other fixes/changes are needed.
Text is now Block justified (except for bullet points). If Left justified looks better I can change it back. Also please make sure the "Sichere, Dynamische und Dezentrale" under the Bitshare logo is correct.

This would be so much easier if I knew German  :P



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1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 paging Max @bitmarket
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
 Please do. By the time we distribute these, Moonstone will be close enough. Moonstone is a monumental milestone for BitShares.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these

Ok, Will make these changes when I get home tonight. Thank you!
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1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 paging Max @bitmarket
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
 Please do. By the time we distribute these, Moonstone will be close enough. Moonstone is a monumental milestone for BitShares.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these
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1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these
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General
 - Could we have "justified"/"block" text instead of left-aligned?
No problem. imo, becasue of the fold line, it may look better with "left" justified.

Page 1:
 - The link to btc38.com is the only one without "https://"
 - can you move the link (qrcode) boxfor bitshares.org to the top and have the
   wallet.bitshares.org and bts101 book directly below that
 - Please rephrase
   "in einem einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software Programm vor."
   to
   "in einer einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software vor."

   "Ein Programm das 24 Stunden"
   to
   "Ein System des 24 Stunden"

   "Ein Programm welches niemanls"
   to
   "Ein System welches niemanls"

   "kein Geld verlieren könnten"
   to
   "kein Geld verlieren können"   (missing "t")


Page 2:
 - second row .. can you switch the "Das Dezentrale System" headline and the
   "power by b" logo so that we have the headlines aligned?
Yes, will work on that

The rest seems just fine.
Thanks for the work!

Will work on, thanks Xeroc
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1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
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General
 - Could we have "justified"/"block" text instead of left-aligned?

Page 1:
 - The link to btc38.com is the only one without "https://"
 - can you move the link (qrcode) boxfor bitshares.org to the top and have the
   wallet.bitshares.org and bts101 book directly below that
 - Please rephrase
   "in einem einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software Programm vor."
   to
   "in einer einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software vor."

   "Ein Programm das 24 Stunden"
   to
   "Ein System des 24 Stunden"

   "Ein Programm welches niemanls"
   to
   "Ein System welches niemanls"

   "kein Geld verlieren könnten"
   to
   "kein Geld verlieren können"   (missing "t")


Page 2:
 - second row .. can you switch the "Das Dezentrale System" headline and the
   "power by b" logo so that we have the headlines aligned?

The rest seems just fine.
Thanks for the work!

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Ok, here's a preview of the German version...
Please review, give thumbs up and OK to finalize or send me any corrections/suggestions please!











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No deadline, but I'd love to meet the Munich area people in person at some point, have some bier/wein whatever.
We are the local BitSharers afterall :)
I just emailed delulo and btswolf as well...
 
Are there any other people living in germany-area that might like to hook up?
Switzerland, Austria or Czech Republic perhaps?
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@delulo is good at these things .. I am paging him ..
do you have a deadline?

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It may need to be tweaked a bit to fit some of the longer sentences in your designated spots on the flyer, so just let us know if so.
Other than that, I'm done with it. @xeroc?
Maybe a space here or there, or runon sentence or anything? grammar? spelling?
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