To the authors: my comments are intended to be constructive, not inciteful. Like you, I endeavor for an accurate and concise message detailing the Bitsares X solution. Unfortunately, I do not feel qualified to draft content on this topic, rather will contribute by asking clarifying questions for your consideration.
I am reading this piece as Patrick Bryne. A majority of the content demonstrates the benefits of the Bitshares X platform as a solution to the crypto-share issuance question he presumably seeks. I feel a disconnect exists in the body of knowledge presented to fully inform the reader of the complete solution.
I am having a difficult time reconciling the demonstrated need for identity management in the crypto-share paper to the VOTE DAC content.