I see you guys are not believers in the Oxford Comma.
Actually the use of the Oxford comma seems to be inconsistent (which is worse than either using it or not using it).
See the
second page:
Save and trade in gold, silver, dollars, or other currencies.
But then see the
third and
sixth pages:
Eliminate the middle men, overhead and bloated profits of traditional banks.
Simply put, your account can’t be raided, compromised or seized.
I have additional feedback:
The Facebook logo in the footer links to "
http://www.facbook.com/officialbitshares" rather than "
http://www.facebook.com/officialbitshares". Interestingly, it appears Facebook owns facbook.com and does the redirection.
The contrast of the text needs to improve for better readability. In some cases in needs to be brighter to contrast against the dark backgrounds it is on, and in other cases it needs to be darker to contrast against the bright backgrounds it is on. I also think some of the text would benefit from being thicker, and that is especially true for the navigation text (which I think would also need some kind of shadows to further improve their readability against the image backgrounds on the home page).
In the very first tab/page of the homepage, both the navigation text and the BitShares logo are hard to read because of the bright lights of the animated image behind it. I think it would benefit from some kind of dim translucent background strip which is fixed to the first tab/page and rolls up and out of sight as the user scrolls down. Or maybe there is a better solution. Whatever the solution, the navigation text and BitShares logo just need to be easily readable on the first tab/page of the homepage, and currently they are not.
I also second the change from "MAC" to "Mac OS X".
And someone please correct me if I am wrong, but in the
http://bitshares.org/merchants/ page, I think it would be appropriate to capitalize two of the titles as follows: "As
Good
As Cash" and "Monetize
Your Float". At least that is according to the rules
here.