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General Discussion / Re: Suggested Press Release regarding the merger
« on: October 21, 2014, 03:31:24 pm »
A press release is all well and good but lets get this all done first. Make a successful transition to BTS, and then author it a glorious creation myth. The release could be timed to come out around the day that coinmarketcap updates to show the new shares so when people ask wtf is going on with bitshares? We can post the link to the press release.
Also I don't like much about how this release is written. *Bitshares* should absolutely be included (eyeballs on bitshares brand!) in the headline and as this should be done after the change is complete the talk of it being a proposal should be taken out and only the actual final deal be talked about (whatever it ends up being).
There's no need to give more than a cursory mention to the original proposal, perhaps mentioning it helps with SEO as it could be an opportunity to post a link to bitsharestalk.org.
And make the headline much more exciting. More like:
Bitshares unites to form Super DAC
Bitshares completes first ever crypto-merger deal
Bitshares unites the first ever crypto-merger deal
Bitshares expands via first of its kind crypto-merger
Also I don't like much about how this release is written. *Bitshares* should absolutely be included (eyeballs on bitshares brand!) in the headline and as this should be done after the change is complete the talk of it being a proposal should be taken out and only the actual final deal be talked about (whatever it ends up being).
There's no need to give more than a cursory mention to the original proposal, perhaps mentioning it helps with SEO as it could be an opportunity to post a link to bitsharestalk.org.
And make the headline much more exciting. More like:
Bitshares unites to form Super DAC
Bitshares completes first ever crypto-merger deal
Bitshares unites the first ever crypto-merger deal
Bitshares expands via first of its kind crypto-merger