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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #60 on: April 01, 2015, 01:28:34 pm »
thanx for the help @xeroc! :)
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #61 on: April 01, 2015, 01:29:29 pm »
Ok .. this would be the version with my proposals integrated:
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EASY, SECURE PAYMENTS
EINFACHE, SICHERE BEZAHLUNG

Transfers of Money and Assets have never been easier. Unlike traditional banks, payments with BitShares are fast, easy and cost effective. Using the BitShares payment network only costs pennies per transaction, with less than 10 seconds for a fully verified confirmation. Not hours or days, like other digital systems. 
Noch nie war es einfacher Überweisungen und Finanzanlagen zu tätigen. Im Gegensatz zu Banken, sind Zahlungen mit BitShares schnell, einfach und haben nur eine geringe Bearbeitungsgebühr.

Eine Onlineüberweisung mit BitShares kostet einen Bruchteil der SEPA-Gebühren
und ist in weniger als 10 Sekunden vollständig überprüft und bestätigt.
Kein tagelanges warten auf die digitalen Systeme der Banken.

So why use BitAssests?
Warum BitAssests nutzen?
 
- Exceptionally Low Volatility
- Aussergewöhnlich niedrige Schwankungen
- $1 bitEUR Relentlessly tracks $1 EUR, Period.
- 1 bitEUR behält stets den Wert von 1 EUR
- 5 - 10 Seconds Cryptographic Transfer Times
- Eine Krypto Überweisung dauert nur 5 -10 Sekunden
- Ultra Low Transaction Fee
- Sehr niedrige Überweisungsgebühr
- Earn Yield on Accounts with Balances
- Erhalt einer Kontorendite auf die Einlage
- Instant Worldwide Money Transfers
- Unmittelbarer weltweiter Geldtransfer

THE SYSTEM DECENTRALIZED
DAS DEZENTRALE SYSTEM

The BitShares Decentralized Exchange is truly a work of art. BitShares has the
capability to handle the transfer volume of every World Stock Exchange, Forex
Money Market, Businesses, Banks and Consumers across the globe.  BitShares will
never need a bailout, it can’t be  manipulated, scammed or have funds
fraudulently transferred.  It is a trustless system where “The Code is the
Constitution” and the code can never be compromised.                           
Read more about this amazing system at  www.bitshares.org 
A new dawn is rising and BitShares welcomes everyone to join.

Der dezentrale Austausch mit BitShares ist wahrhaftig ein Kunstwerk. BitShares
ist in der Lage Transaktionen in jeder Höhe und jedweder Art (wie Aktien- Währungshandel,
Geschäfte, Bankgeschäfte und Kontenverwaltungen) weltweit
durchzuführen. BitShares wird nie einen Rettungsschirm brauchen. Es kann nicht
manipuliert werden. Das System kann nicht betrügen oder betrogen werden. Es ist
ein System das nicht auf dem Vertrauen auf Personen basiert. Stattdessen gilt “Der Krypto
Code ist die Verfassung” und dieser Code ist neutral, nicht zu manipulieren und
von jedermann einsehbar.

Lesen Sie mehr über das einmalige System auf www.bitshares.org
Ein neuer Tag bricht an und BitShares freut sich auf Ihren Beitritt und Sie begrüssen zu dürfen.

BUSINESS ON THE BLOCKCHAIN
DAS UNTERNEHMEN BLOCKCHAIN

Entrepreneurs and Businesses now have the ability to integrate into the BitShares ecosystem by creating their own “User Issued Assets” or UIA’s.
Unternehmer und Unternehmen haben jetzt die Möglichkeit, in das BitShares
Ökosystem zu investieren, indem Sie Ihre eigenen “User Issued Assets” (vom
Nutzer selbst ausgegebene Wertpapiere) kurz UIA integrieren.
 
Similar to stocks, UIA’s give businesses the power to legally issue IPOs of their stock,  as well as engage in other forms of  crowd funding.  Users can then trade these stocks for pennies per transaction, in a decentralized market that includes bitAssets like bitUSD, bitGOLD, bitEUR and more. Preserve your Bottom Line and get Business done today, not tomorrow.
Ähnlich wie bei Aktien, geben UIA  Unternehmen die Macht, Ihre Anteile legal zu
veräussern, bzw. sich in Crowdfunding Plattforemen zu engagieren. Der Nutzer
kann diese Aktien für wenige Cents in einem dezentralisierten Markt
transferieren, und Sie für bitAssets wie bitUSD, bitGold, bitEuro und viele mehr
anbieteten.
 
BitShares makes this happen by enabling...
BitShares kann dies ermöglichen, durch...

- Custom creation of UIA’s
- Kundenspezifische Erstellung von UIA
- Ability to “Whitelist” Users
- Positivliste von Nutzer
- Legal IPOs for Small or Large Businesses
- Legale IPOs für kleine und große Unternehmen
- Accepting of bitAssets for payment of goods or services
- Schnelle und bequeme Internetzahlung von Waren und Dienstleistungen durch bitEUR
- Easy access to a Global liquidity system
- Einfacher Zugang zu einem globalen Liquiditätssystem

A NEW GLOBAL ECONOMY
EINE NEUE WELTWIRTSCHAFT

Imagine wrapping our whole Global Economy into a single decentralized and secured software program.  A program that operates 24hrs a day, 365 days a year.  A program that can never go bankrupt, never get shut down by governments and never run away with your money. This is now possible, thanks to BitShares and its secure network. Opening the doors for Businesses and Consumers to connect instantly, with no middlemen.
Stellen Sie sich unsere gesamte Weltwirtschaft in einem einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software Programm vor. Ein Programm das 24 Stunden am Tag und 365 Tage im Jahr arbeitet. Ein Programm, welches niemals Bankrott geht, niemals von der Regierung verboten bzw. abgeschaltet werden kann und Sie dadurch kein Geld verlieren könnten. Dank BitShares und seinem sicheren Netzwerk ist dies nun möglich. Es öffnet Türen für Unternehmer und Verbraucher, da sofort eine Verbindung hergestellt wird ohne Zwischenhändler.
 
BitShares gives you...
BitShares gibt Dir...
 
- Secure BlockChain Technology
- Sichere BlockChain Technologie
- 5 - 10 Second Confirmation Times
- 5-10 Sekunden Bestätigung der Transaktion

- Free and Easy to Use Software
- Kostenlose und einfach zu bedienende Software
- Interest on your “Asset” Account Balances
- Zinsen auf Ihre "Anlagen" Kontenstände
 
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Ok cool. Is this considered the final version for the German translation?
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #62 on: April 01, 2015, 01:33:44 pm »
It may need to be tweaked a bit to fit some of the longer sentences in your designated spots on the flyer, so just let us know if so.
Other than that, I'm done with it. @xeroc?
Maybe a space here or there, or runon sentence or anything? grammar? spelling?
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #63 on: April 01, 2015, 01:56:05 pm »
@delulo is good at these things .. I am paging him ..
do you have a deadline?
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #64 on: April 01, 2015, 02:18:29 pm »
No deadline, but I'd love to meet the Munich area people in person at some point, have some bier/wein whatever.
We are the local BitSharers afterall :)
I just emailed delulo and btswolf as well...
 
Are there any other people living in germany-area that might like to hook up?
Switzerland, Austria or Czech Republic perhaps?
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #65 on: April 02, 2015, 01:11:03 am »
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@xeroc

Ok, here's a preview of the German version...
Please review, give thumbs up and OK to finalize or send me any corrections/suggestions please!











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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #66 on: April 02, 2015, 06:02:03 am »
General
 - Could we have "justified"/"block" text instead of left-aligned?

Page 1:
 - The link to btc38.com is the only one without "https://"
 - can you move the link (qrcode) boxfor bitshares.org to the top and have the
   wallet.bitshares.org and bts101 book directly below that
 - Please rephrase
   "in einem einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software Programm vor."
   to
   "in einer einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software vor."

   "Ein Programm das 24 Stunden"
   to
   "Ein System des 24 Stunden"

   "Ein Programm welches niemanls"
   to
   "Ein System welches niemanls"

   "kein Geld verlieren könnten"
   to
   "kein Geld verlieren können"   (missing "t")


Page 2:
 - second row .. can you switch the "Das Dezentrale System" headline and the
   "power by b" logo so that we have the headlines aligned?

The rest seems just fine.
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #67 on: April 02, 2015, 08:15:33 am »
1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #68 on: April 02, 2015, 01:32:11 pm »
General
 - Could we have "justified"/"block" text instead of left-aligned?
No problem. imo, becasue of the fold line, it may look better with "left" justified.

Page 1:
 - The link to btc38.com is the only one without "https://"
 - can you move the link (qrcode) boxfor bitshares.org to the top and have the
   wallet.bitshares.org and bts101 book directly below that
 - Please rephrase
   "in einem einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software Programm vor."
   to
   "in einer einzigen dezentralen und sicheren Software vor."

   "Ein Programm das 24 Stunden"
   to
   "Ein System des 24 Stunden"

   "Ein Programm welches niemanls"
   to
   "Ein System welches niemanls"

   "kein Geld verlieren könnten"
   to
   "kein Geld verlieren können"   (missing "t")


Page 2:
 - second row .. can you switch the "Das Dezentrale System" headline and the
   "power by b" logo so that we have the headlines aligned?
Yes, will work on that

The rest seems just fine.
Thanks for the work!

Will work on, thanks Xeroc
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #69 on: April 02, 2015, 01:37:09 pm »
1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #70 on: April 02, 2015, 02:57:08 pm »
1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 paging Max @bitmarket
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
 Please do. By the time we distribute these, Moonstone will be close enough. Moonstone is a monumental milestone for BitShares.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these
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Re: UPDATED **Now Available** Printable BitShares TriFold Brochure
« Reply #71 on: April 02, 2015, 04:28:55 pm »
1. AFAIK, there is no german version of BitShares 101 eBook, so no sense in putting that at the top.
 Hmm, I thought that was done already. I can take it out if you want.
2. Maybe we should get german subtitles typed up for all of Max's videos?
 paging Max @bitmarket
3. "Up and Running" should be: Jetzt Kannst Du Loslegen
 Ok, will change
4. BITSHARESTALK link does not need to be ALL CAPS
 will correct
5. In the wallets section, add: MoonStone.io (use camel-case styling on the URL's)
 Since this isn't available yet, I would advise to not add this. I will if you want me to though.
 Please do. By the time we distribute these, Moonstone will be close enough. Moonstone is a monumental milestone for BitShares.
6. Remove ALL of the https:// and http:// stuff, it's very distracting and anyone who runs those servers should do auto redirects to the https version of the site automatically anyway so the user doesn't have to do it, or, type any of that cryptic crap.
No problem, will remove these

Ok, Will make these changes when I get home tonight. Thank you!
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« Reply #72 on: April 03, 2015, 01:01:51 am »
Here is the newest fixes.

Please carefully look over and let me know if any other fixes/changes are needed.
Text is now Block justified (except for bullet points). If Left justified looks better I can change it back. Also please make sure the "Sichere, Dynamische und Dezentrale" under the Bitshare logo is correct.

This would be so much easier if I knew German  :P



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« Reply #73 on: April 03, 2015, 07:33:25 am »
I assume it's in A4 format too. It looks flawless to me!
 
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« Reply #74 on: April 03, 2015, 03:18:14 pm »
I assume it's in A4 format too. It looks flawless to me!
 
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Yes, this is in A4 format.
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