March Newsletter

[xeroc]

Bitshares.org is the new site. Price there would be cool.

price about protoshares on bitshares.org? Doesnt sound logical. We need the price for bitshares, which is unkown until chain is released and first 'centralized' exchanges trade them

[CLains]

It's a great project, hope very thing develop smoothly.

Hi stan, we are btc38.com from, could you please add our PTS price on your http://invictus.io/ .
We are appreciate about it, thanks

Bitshares.org is the new site. Price there would be cool.

[Btc38]

It's a great project, hope very thing develop smoothly.

Hi stan, we are btc38.com from, could you please add our PTS price on your http://invictus.io/ .
We are appreciate about it, thanks

[xeroc]

Could you use "full justification" for the newsletter. Would look much nicer .. at least to my eyes

[Troglodactyl]

And make sure you are using the right codes in the right places! Your “Founder ID” is just the BTC or
PTS address you used to donate. Your public key is is 16 characters longer.

This is ambiguous.  The Founder ID is the address to which you sent the founder donation, not the one from which you sent the donation.

Great newsletter!

[onceuponatime]

with more
and more high quality content,

can be rephrase as

with higher quality contents.

I like Stan's version better.

... again
many strategic relationships that are about to bear fruit

fruits. Same as before.

from: fruit definition by Webster's New World:

noun pl. fruit or fruits  (Therefore "fruit" is fine in both cases)

It’s “shares” go up in value
as it earns more profits
- not just because of transient “hype”.

It’s shares represent a chance to receive promotional shares in all future clones derived from it.

"It's" has to be no apostrophe because it is a possessive form of pronoun

Correct. "It's" means "it is"

[donkeypong]

It's brilliant! Enough to stoke my excitement even more.

[jwiz168]

with more
and more high quality content,

can be rephrase as

with higher quality contents.

... again
many strategic relationships that are about to bear fruit

fruits. Same as before.

It’s “shares” go up in value
as it earns more profits
- not just because of transient “hype”.

It’s shares represent a chance to receive promotional shares in all future clones derived from it.

"It's" has to be no apostrophe because it is a possessive form of pronoun

[jwiz168]

While our engineers have been putting together software for
Keyhotee and BitSharesX.

softwares

Since both Keyhotee and BitsharesX are different entities.

[solaaire]

1) the Keyhotee image on page 8 is different from the logo displayed on the Bitshares.org/solutions website. you may want to consider changing it just for the sake of being consistent

2) "You can even keep them all for your own greedy personal gain" this line on page 4 comes off a bit abrasive, but perhaps this was your intent?



overall an exciting newsletter, there are absolutely tons of projects to be hyped about

[onceuponatime]

Your public key is is 16 characters longer

[Overthetop]

Great to see dev-teams are growing ...

     

[solaaire]

 “Out of all the DACs other that BitShares X,

should be 'than' instead of 'that'

[solaaire]

It’s purpose it to mitigate man-in-the-attacks

[jwiz168]

Blossoms will soon be
popping out all over, followed by leaves ... and then the formation of fruit.  (All subjects are in plural form) . It should be fruits