just wanted to point out you misspelled BitShares on the 3rd paragraph of the 2nd point.
"3）The performance of market pegged assets are getting better
Market pegged assets are the most important features of Bitshars ."
Also there could be another line break between point 4 and 5.
On point five "..Toast gave up a 15K USD/month salary to joint the Bitshares team . He is also a developer who has revealed his identity.." shouldn't it be join instead of joint?
"In order to that , you’ll need professional marketing teams ." I guess it's missing "do" so it would be "In order to do that..." Correct me if im wrong^^
"You can build a anonymous gateway". Should be "an" instead of "a" i think.
And really nice job to keep people updated^^
Edit: Could you give more info about www.tradebts.com?
Apparently is in chinese and I can't understand it. And wow i didn't know Yunbi used an asset from the BitShares platform for tipping!