I like it!
It is great that it is emotional!
The following are really just hints where I could see it being improved:
The kid was used for the purposes of the adults that made it say what it said. It didn't say it because it was something it had an urge to say. Do you believe she understands what she said? She was just citing or reading something she didn't understand in order to please her parents or who ever. This doesn't make the content very credible and is not a nice thing anyway.
For my taste, one of the standard high glance snippets (1:53-1:155) would be enough, looks a bit like "ideal world overload" like this.
Maybe the "powerpoint style" around min 2:00 could be made into something more professional (text more integrated into the background).