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« on: March 09, 2016, 12:05:03 pm »
I see 3 things that may be improved.
A little mistake on "voilà" in french. You wrote "viola".
We already had a lot of critics for over promising. The list you give includes bond market, sheduled payments, .. I think it could be wise to specify that these are in the protocol and soon add to the GUI to avoid another wave of " BitShares is pure vapor, bla bla bla"
One last little thing. The analogy with the "New York minute" is confusing for anyone who is not a native english speaker" and lead to think our block confirmation time 60 sec instead of 3, soon 1. A different analogy without measure of time would probably avoid the confusion.
I hope this can help to improve slightly the already amazing article you wrote. Big fan !!!
When it's done we could translate it in french and post it in bitsharesfcx.com and other french crypto web site ?
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