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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #30 on: July 11, 2014, 08:15:48 am »
Here is the new update for the video!
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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #31 on: July 11, 2014, 06:26:11 pm »
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My only comment would be that it doesn't address at all how shareholders make money. Maybe somehow explain that you can register a domain using your shares or become a shareholder and earn money because ....etc..

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #32 on: July 11, 2014, 07:36:49 pm »
Here is the new update for the video!
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.p2p demo video

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It is great! Also the voice sounds really professional. Is that you toast??
For my taste the sounds are too loud compared to the voice. Makes it harder to focus on the content...

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #33 on: July 12, 2014, 09:45:41 pm »
just watched this w/ my gf

her thoughts: "cool, but the first part about domains and DNR or whatever was confusing"

me: i thought it was great, my only gripe is that the images dont seem high rez and so they appear jaggy around the edges

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #34 on: July 12, 2014, 10:16:13 pm »
her thoughts: "cool, but the first part about domains and DNR or whatever was confusing"

after rewatching it a few times, i really agree with her. the video is very clear and easy to follow, except for the first sentence!

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What is dot p2p. Dot p2p is a decentralized top level domain, and an alternative to the traditional DNS system.

i think you could cut that down to:

"What is dot p2p? Dot p2p is a new alternative to the traditional DNS system."

without losing anything, simply because you go on to explain the advantages of decentralization in much clearer terms right after that anyway

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #35 on: July 12, 2014, 10:35:31 pm »
triple post!

just wanted to say that the animations are fantastic, easy to follow, and go very well with the script.

and one final suggestion: at around the 28 second mark you finish saying "private key" and there is a few seconds of down time til the animation zooms in and you begin your next sentence.

i do not think private key is a well known term among most people. maybe you could use that blank audio space as on opportunity to fill the knowledge gap by adding something like

"you can only lose control when you choose to share your private key. This is very similar to sharing a password and should be avoided."

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #36 on: July 13, 2014, 09:53:18 am »
off-topic --> but great initiative!

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delulo i really like your signature .. will make a  small donation later the day ...  +5%
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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #37 on: July 13, 2014, 02:42:33 pm »
Thanks guys, Great feedback so far:)

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For my taste the sounds are too loud compared to the voice. Makes it harder to focus on the content...
Ill tweak the sound

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"What is dot p2p? Dot p2p is a new alternative to the traditional DNS system."
Good idea IMO

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i thought it was great, my only gripe is that the images dont seem high rez and so they appear jaggy around the edges
Hm, all images are all vectors made by me
Quality looks fine to me. Can I get a screen shot of what you are seeing for comparison?

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"you can only lose control when you choose to share your private key. This is very similar to sharing a password and should be avoided."
This is worth considering for sure.

I am excited to wrap this up:D
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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #38 on: July 13, 2014, 07:09:39 pm »
Hm, all images are all vectors made by me
Quality looks fine to me. Can I get a screen shot of what you are seeing for comparison?

oh cool, very nice work man

I just messed around with Vimeo a bit - turns out the jaggies I described are only an issue when watching the video in HD in the default,  non-fullscreen view. Maximizing the video to fullscreen fixes the issue I was describing. Turning off the HD option fixed the issue as well. I'm guessing Vimeo downsamples HD videos that aren't being viewed in fullscreen or something like that.

Anyway, it appears to be a non-issue after all :D thanks for responding and im glad some of the feedback was helpful!

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #39 on: July 24, 2014, 12:36:49 am »
Here is the final version.
Any outstanding mistakes can be fixed of course.

Thanks for all your feedback everyone!
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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #40 on: July 24, 2014, 01:05:18 am »
Very nice! Have started forwarding it.

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #41 on: July 24, 2014, 01:08:09 am »
Very nice! Have started forwarding it.

Don't yet! Wait until we get our shit together
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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #42 on: August 02, 2014, 12:41:09 pm »
Very nice! Have started forwarding it.
Don't yet! Wait until we get our shit together

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Re: .p2p intro video - first draft - feedback wanted!
« Reply #43 on: August 02, 2014, 12:55:06 pm »
triple post!

just wanted to say that the animations are fantastic, easy to follow, and go very well with the script.

and one final suggestion: at around the 28 second mark you finish saying "private key" and there is a few seconds of down time til the animation zooms in and you begin your next sentence.

i do not think private key is a well known term among most people. maybe you could use that blank audio space as on opportunity to fill the knowledge gap by adding something like

"you can only lose control when you choose to share your private key. This is very similar to sharing a password and should be avoided."

Agree. Password or Secret Word/Phrase are possible substitutes.